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First readers needed

Post by _rip » Thu Oct 07, 2010 8:17 pm

Hi,

I have a 10k Science Fiction short that I need some first readers for.

If you're interested in reading it, PM me your email, and I'll shoot you the PDF (or an RTF). I'll ask the following questions:

How is the hook?
Where did you lose interest?
Any bits that drag?
Any questions about continuity?
What did you notice between the lines?
General comments about terminology?


I will ask that you post your responses IN THIS THREAD, so that we can crowd-source them.

tia,

rip


scribble.

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